his story is nice. We have a lot of good elements, like a nice system, a good combat scene, nice loot. This is a good crafting story.
But we have also a few problems. The MC is alone. We don't really have other characters except for the MC. (talking about adventuree not girls he is sleeping)
Usually on RR when the MC has no friends he is a badass op personality traveling in the wild. But this is not the case in this story. The MC stays in his city and craft. This makes the story tension very low. Author should focus on MC traveling and more world biulding rather than foolish love and his foolish decision.
I highly recommend the author to invest in other characters. This will make the MC personality grow and add complexity to your world.
