Blood Assimilation - Reviews

Hey guys!
This BMDR here, the author of this book. This is my second novel and so far, I have managed to write 40 chapters with 68,263 words at the moment. My dear readers, I would like to know how you feel about this novel overall. Is it a good read or not? Is the pace too slow or too fast? Is this worth your power stones and such? However, I mostly care about the reviews of my novel(s) as without it, I will not know how to improve the book, so do tell me what you think about my book: [Blood Assimilation] through your honest reviews.
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Please, I am kowtowing and begging you to do me this favor; if not for me, at least for other new readers of my book.
Other than that, you can also check out my other and first novel, [Two Worlds: Same But Different].
Thank you for your time and have good reading experience.

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The story has a common beginning but the one thing that got me out of it is the simple that the mc is inconsistent and the plot is all broken how the mc doesn't think that even with him getting beaten to death regularly and everyone he knows KNOWS of this and he doesn't care is the worst part, no empathy or connection to be created with characters like that. (his friend knows because she studies with him and there is a background that makes it obvious and his family once again knows why mc himself spoke with them.)

Honestly this book is a disappointment to me personally. It is way to slow for this type of novel. He unlocked his powers but doesn’t fight for almost 15 chapters. He doesn’t tell anyone. Makes no sense and is horrible written. I‘m sorry but this novel is to slow for anything enjoyable. Who wants to read the man character get bashed and then do nothing for almost 20 chapters. Lame asf. Not a great read.

honestly incredibly tough to read. very stereotypical and constant use of the f bomb. the dialogue needs alot of work and the grammar isn't great either. I feel like it borrows from several other novels line vampire system and bloodline system and just does it poorly

This story has a lot of cliches. The mc who is constantly and incessantly bullied, and treated like POW in a vietnamese camp. The Mc who is shunned by everyone, even at some point including his parents. Potential female love interest, wielding Ice Powers. Cute little sister. Stupid young masters. As of chapter 151 Mc has not gotten revenge on the people who bullied and tortured him, the only thing close was simply punching someone inconsequential character in the face to prove that he had awakened power. I wouldn't say the novel is too bad, I only read until 151 because I thought his power was interesting and I also enjoyed the multiple power systems present throughout the world.  I wouldn't say I was bored, it certainly kept me occupied and entertained for a bit, but it failed to draw me in, in any meaningful way. So sadly chapter 151 is where I drop, I think people should give it a go it might draw them in, but now me.

come from chapter one and im here to say I lost braincells reading those insults, author please fix them?

MC extremamente chato e cansativo...........................................................................................................

Love it so far, especially how he played the criminal and police haha?? ???????????????????????????????????

The synopsis feels like it is creating hype. The MC is more like a Naruto who doesn't seem to have any kind of negative emotion (even towards enemies who have literally tortured him). It kind of creates a misalignment between the MC's past and the rest of the story. Would have been better if it was one or the other - a lighter past or a darker protagonist. Still great work on the writing quality. Grammar is good enough and it's a fun read if you are willing to skip through a few chapters that feel a lot more like fillers.

I will give it 3 out of 5.
The first few chapters are good then mc's personality suddenly changes, from then on there are some good chapters and some bad ones, if the story was written in a serious tone like few first chapters then it would be a gem.

I read until the free chapters.

I enjoy it at start because mc kind of smart even though there's no world introduction where things just keep popping up all a sudden superpower,magic, cultivation, system and rift etc. It lacks world building but still entertaining until the flaw start showing up when he awakened where too much ranting/monolugue happen.MC biggest trait as smart all of a sudden turning to idiot where all his secret and explaining how it works one by one to his best friend even considering telling the system and his cheat until he understand it how much of a idiot he is? For the all people he should understand how to be cautios because how people treat him even betrayed by his childhood friend. This destroy the novel to me. author changing his Character from smart to idiot for a plot there is no stability. I mean he can make a mistake but not like this this is idiocy to the higher level.
Then. Even villain want to kill mc because color of hair. LOL

I can only rraise it 3.5/5.0