Novels tell stories but not this oneThis is a textbook where the author rambles about geography, it is either forest, ocean or mountain, don't be surprised if it is monotonous what with the severe lack of creativity The mc does a bunch of random things each chapter with no plan or goals, mc is hence bland and boring, as expected from a guy who monologues each chapterMc is an idiot which is common in novels where the mc has unlimited power but a mind of a 10 year old, this is the consequence of no character development after all how can you have character development with no conflict (overpowered mcs from the start rarely have conflicts) yet some authors can pull it of but not this one Overall it gives the impression that the author has no idea that there are readers, therefore spending each chapter rambling about random things with no flow or planning (why post a novel online when all you do is indulge in yourself)My conclusion: This is a textbook and not a novel, the only way to avoid this is to plan your work and get opinions from friends and readers.
