The story starts off well enough. Minor weird or bad points but well within acceptable levels. However the sypnosis is very misleading because his "grand plan" took 1 paragraph to unfold. And it wasmt really much of a plan.Quality rapidly took a deep dive downwards as the story continued. English standard clearly went down sharply and characters say or do or think things in an incredibly convenient way for the sake of the plot, often acting in ways that totally disregard any resemblance of intelligence the character may have previously displayed. Author tries to use certain phrases in wrong ways or simply force them into a persons speech leading to awkard lines of dialogue or paragraphs that are impossible to read. The worse of which was when he tried to combine 2 phrases into a line: Hold your high horses. Overall, story quality is barely average and quickly drops off into mindless territory with highly inconsistent characters.English quality starts at proper english before rpaidly becoming a hodgepot of barely legible paragraphs, overly bombastic but meaningless lines and tottally unreadble paragraphs.Read it if you are bored with nothing else to read between updates and you like the genre. Recommen you at least have complete mastery of english so that you can understand the pidgin gibberish this novel tries to use so often.
