Blade of the Unbound - Reviews

I am shamelessly leaving this review as review #10 to get my rating. So far, I'm trying to maintain 2 chapters a day, so I sure hope you like hot milfs ??

I only got through 12 chapters. So take the review for what it’s worth. The mc of this story is supposed to be someone who is reborn into the game world prior to the game going live. The mc is someone who was involved in the end battle between the game company and the resistance. This premise sets the character up as being a high level character who should know a lot about the game. What we get however is someone who seems to be fumbling around without a clear goal. Don’t worry though because almost every chapter he wants to plan what he is going to do. This story has a similar premise to legendary mechanic but unfortunately doesn’t hit the mark to keep readers interested. Many chapter comments say “boring”. I have to agree and it is primarily because the mc is bumbling around like someone who is playing the game for the first time in their life with a pro friend giving him hints on things to make his life easier like how to develop skills instead of being a veteran player himself. I had high hopes but I’m gonna pass on the rest of this one.

Don't mind me, I just think using IRL established actors and the likes in your novel is lazy writing and I really can't read a novel where thr MC for some reason ends up spending a lot of time with some famous actress like for example Scarlet Johanson.

This book gives a mixed feeling, it’s very complicated. Sometimes it interests you, other times you fall out. It’s tough to review it thoroughly. Let’s hope we get to read more of this to decide if it’s worth it or not

unique storyline that different than average novel but still give you nice plot character development and honestly the girls get fall in love too fast but no problem i like it ?

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its a good book so far honestly i love it he doesnt shapeshift but its still entertaining and the quality of writing is amazing                  

Great story please update  soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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It’s good and has a decent plot but it’s just all over the place and half the time I have no idea what’s happening. The grammar needs to be checked and the dialogue needs to change from just being cussing and have more coherent conversations. Other than that the books pretty good

Umupo din si Ayuki at nakatingin sa kalangitan.

"So the three great powers from the holy war finally managed to have a mix-blooded child. A lot surely has changed since my slumber. So tell me girl, who was your sire?"