Black God of Lightning (Revision pending) - Reviews

This story is not your average story. The mc isn't your typical mc. He can be cowardly in some situations. I am writing this story about growth. Not only does the mc get stronger physically but mentally too. If you looking for an mc who is perfect from the get-go. Then this is not the novel for you. Web novel is big with a lot of great novels with perfect mcs. I'd encourage you to read that and not to read this.

But if you do read and still your review says. Coward mc but nothing else. Then I am going to take that as a compliment because it's an intentional flaw.

Please like this so people can see this first.

I like it hope he gets more op later on.

Do you like traps?”
“Yes”
“Would you bang a trap?”
“Depends”
“Are traps, in fact, male?”
“Yes”
“Then you’re gay”
“No I’m not”
“You just said you would bang a trap!”
“But I’m not gay tho”

Coward Mc, not even willing to fight for his first love is his second live

everything is great the writing the release rates...the only problem....is the story and mc(complete and utter coward. even system calls him one). Unfortunately i cant see this ever becoming popular.
rated 3.4*
Ty for writing this and if u enjoy writing this keep going =)

I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much...

A hidden Gem . it's a well written story i like very much .
A must read. a must read .a must read. a must read . a must read .a must read dqkspdkàidfs;kdofk;fdo;fgok;fskd

A well writen story. The characters are done extremely well and background scenerio is well thought out................................................

So far so good nothing to complain about the story hopefully he starts practicing lightning related spells
soon its my favorite element

Keep up the good work hoping for a update soon as possible

So far I absolutely love the story. I have been waiting for a more western light novel and I am hoping that you can give this to me. But so far so good ;).

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I liked the characters of this story.
but i didn't really get your jokes. moreover, you've to reduce repeated events.
otherwise, the style u right is too difficult so i guess that time and the difficulty was the reason you repeated such sentence.
I look forward that you will use more lightning in next chapter.

I'm on board with a story if their mc has lighting powers. Always been a fan of it. Having an mc that's a different nationality other than Asian is a bonus. Webnovel needs more diversity. If you see the author see this, keep up the good work!