Why do authors have to have their MC go to a fantasy world that has magic and is set in a midevil time line but they are bringing forth modern things. Some are ok but you bring in machines and it ruins things. What's next Elves with rapid fire assault rifles
This book is fantastic as was your first book, The dialogue is so amazing that it paints clear pictures in my mind. I can imagine every line, it’s as if I’m seeing a movie. I love the flow too
