Aight my first Review in ages... Welp welp author san!
I like this, and by that i mean that i like how dis story is goin... The concept is cool, writing quality is actually better than what mostly I've seen online...
Although yea i saw some grammar errors but ik ur a human too (correct em bish.. jk)
The dialogues seem authentic too! Although yea I'd like to point this out that the chaps... Are like a bit overwhelming to me.. maybe because I'm a slow pace reader but yeah it was actually a bit too much for me...
Like the title distribution and the authority, they were nicely done and all but i saw some rushing there...
But yea if i put that aside, i can smell a good OP story here... So, gimme more chaps bish :v kek... [img=Feeling it]
