Beyond Wonderland - Reviews

Hello author.. when will you release the other chapters. we're looking forward to it and I'm so eager to read it? and please make it perfect smarter, powerful and stronger of our MC. Hope he is one of a kind and so loyal to his partner/lover, pls don't disappoint us. hehe thanks ?and i hope you can notice me senpai ?

Thugs are going to get interesting as you go along... but in a heavily political way where America (sorry "Sunset Empire")'s top tech owners amd it's ambassadors, reporters attitude and mannerisms are ripped straight out of a Xantia, the evil overloard template. I mean they are possibly not the greatest people, but easily angered narcissistic neanderthals is the default (& so far only) template.Also the retaliation event later on. I don't think the MC whom is considered a genius by that time (or the author), considers what happened in hospitals, doctor's offices and similarly sensitive infrastructure, this is not a good guy by any means(though he is painted as such).

I love it so far can't wait to read more. great world building cuz I sense an economy. also I'm bad at reviews so xpppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

Honestly, i thought the plot armor was not that big of a deal. I was wrong, terribly and extremely wrong. This is a force field of plot armor, it spread everywhere and affect everything. But if you can deal with it it become a funny story

IT'S F*CKING GREAT...IT'S F*CKING GREAT...IT'S F*CKING GREAT...IT'S F*CKING GREAT...IT'S F*CKING GREAT...IT'S F*CKING GREAT...IT'S F*CKING GREAT...

the author's previous novel had a very nice start (until a bit after trial read ended) n then the author converted the novel into trash by very badly copying another novel..can't help but worry it'll be the same for this novel so not gonna waste my time on this

'Arthur' made up a story where she was ambushed due to her reputation and he saved her while her guard distracted them. Of course, Joseph didn't know that 'Arthur' was already stronger than him already.

"As much as I want to continue this lovely conversation, better hurry and scurry off, plenty of hostiles incoming~" singsonged System in a cheerful voice.

-- the image of Ciel's babyhood --

Okay, let's go back to the story. I know that many of you are curious to know the other characters because of the last three chapter was emphasizing the main character Xiaomi and her Mom dad and little brother Jay. I don't won't to spoil the story but I will give you my beloved viewers a little head ups of the story so that it became more enjoyable as the story hit up:)

Hi! Nicholas here this story might not still be available yet..... but let's try to do stuff..... and have fun I gues....