Remember reading this in a forum. Its not that bad actually. Reason to 5 star, i just cant stand seing a game element rate to low.So... bite me.Not 140 char yet.
Sigh look I know I gave it a 3 star review, don't let that number stop you from reading please. This power system I love it too pieces the writing style of the author just needs some polishing on the mechanics. There's not huge grammar issues or anything it's readable just needs work. I'll follow this series closely hopefully one day I can give it the 5 stars I know this story should be able to get.
seems like a good story, it's just translated very poorly you can definitely tell English isn't the authors first language, if you had this story translated better I would definitely read it, but as it is it's far to confusing.
Its great so far should give it a try.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
She slowly approached one of the wolves. The wolf growled louder in response but as she got closer it never attacked. She finally got close enough to the wolf and put her hand on its head and started petting it. The wolf stopped growling and the pack soon left.
I was nervous, 'why does he want to be alone with me I don't like that NOO COME BACK EDWARD DON'T LEAVE ME ALONE WITH HIM ' I was just screaming inside for help but, Unfortunately he left me alone with this Ethan person.
