Between Time - Reviews

I am giving this 5 stars purely because chapter 21 got a serious laugh out of me. Shame the author abandoned the book.Shame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.ShameShame.Shame.Shame.Shame.

Currently read enough to write this review. The author did a great job in making the start enticing. Although the start is pretty slow, but hey what makes a great structure is its foundation.(pros and cons at the bottom if this is too long)I'll start with the MC. He had some dark sht past. In his past life he has been dubbed as a hero because he never killed anyone. Until he was betrayed by most of his friends whom he once protected (protected them from what? go and read the novel). He got reincarnated into a cultivation world as an adopted son of a patriarch. He also grew massive trust issue (well who wouldn't) and is now a lot more careful. If you have questions about his real family and if he cares for them, well they are not shown yet but hopefully soon(yes I am also excited for some familial fluff).The few characters that have appeared  are well written. They are not flat. They are not those types who just sit on the side and cheer from what I've read. I can already see that this is not a one man army novel where the mc takes on the whole world alone. The harem is not rushed which is good. I can see that the author is planning on building a proper solid relationship with the potential harem member(s).That means r-18 will come a bit later(But Im sure author wont fail us when the time comes.). From what I said you can already guess that the romance in this novel is going to be great.The world building is amazingly done so far and has lots of potential. The mysteries being served to us are like a box full of treasures but you cant open it, it makes you want to dig into the authors brain and unveil them. I'll probably retract this review and write another one once more chapters are out.So to sum it upPros:1. The story is written well with its fair share of mysteries.2. The harem is not being rushed3. The world background is currently on its infancy but its got tons of potential4. So far the characters that have shown up are well designed. For the development we'll have to see in the futureCons:1. The slow start2. Some lengthy explanations which could have been said with fewer words great novel and its worth giving a go

Well...I thought I left a review a year ago or so, i think a little more than a year.This is awesome the interaction between characters are well made, and personally I like the romance ;).The unique thing that I didn't like is the beta personality of the mc.Is more like a beta japanese mc than an American but if you ignore it it's good.Ps: Author i think it's time to make an actualization to the tags.Ps 2.0: if you want more public you can erase all the chapter and re upload all of them in 1 day

a truly wonderful experience the protagonist is not some cut and paste archetype of I'm a hero so the world moves with me or yes the odds are against me but somehow everything turns out fine .

He just turned around left.

I pulled it down slowly as I saw his large one spring out. I threw his boxer away. I gripped onto his member with my little hand while pumping it. He groaned. "Let me feel you Already Naeun. Stop teasing, I might punish you" He said. I leaned to face his gorgeous face as my hand continued with its work.

Then James went through the classified files to see some details and found what the chief named it. He asked Damien to read it.

The Lady of the Skies, given the name of Prealaes by the first beings of Lios. Her hair as white as a cloud, flowing gently as the winds danced with her form. She is bound to forever watch over Lios along with the other *Seven. Her counterpart, the Lady of the Seas was given the name of Iyadai. Together they form storms over the seas, lightning striking with every swift movement of their bodies. The fabrics of their gowns dancing over the lands, giving life to the land with rain. Every 100 years, Iyadai and Prealaes reunite with one another and dance together until the sun rises once more. This is when all of Lios experiences the deadliest storms.

Obrolan kamipun mengalir hingga tak terasa sudah hampir 1 jam kami mengobrol di telepon. Entah kenapa aku suka dengan suaranya.... melihat foto yg dikirimkannya menambah rasa suka dan penasaran ku.

-A part goes to your patron God;

Issei bergumam pada dirinya sendiri ketika dia berteleportasi ke Cina dan menyodok beberapa penjahat kelas bawah, mengikat mereka ke tiang telepon dan memanggil polisi ke lokasi itu.