when are you going to add to the story so please send thru the chapters so when can continue with the story as it's hard to stay focused on it with the constant waiting..........
I never thought this story would be this good.....I can't compare it to others as it's my first but colour me impressed, specially the character design of Di Chan and the world design.
! It's a captivating magic novel that explores a world where magic is harnessed through a unique and interconnected power system. The story follows a group of young wizards as they navigate the intricacies of this magical world, uncovering ancient secrets and facing thrilling challenges along the way. The author does a fantastic job of describing the magic system and its rules, making it feel immersive and believable. The characters are well-developed, and their journeys are filled with excitement, mystery, and personal growth. Overall, it's a must-read for any magic and fantasy lover! ?✨
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He licked me again and again. Eating me like I was his dinner. Soon I came again. With that he gave me a long lick and leaned back pushing his member in again. I arched again.
As they strolled past an array of shops adorned with colorful displays, Suyin's eyes sparkled with anticipation, eager to explore the treasures that awaited them.
The phase of the story is Getting boring Tbh... Author seems stretching 1 Chapter into 5 or more so chapters.. And Eva's and MC's reunion seems kind of lackluster... And what's with this MC? .. Can't he be more 'Honest' to his Wife?!!. .. It feels like MC didn't even trust Eva and also for the latter... Everytime MC introduces a Woman character.. Eva seems to be Overreacting and this MC reacts like TF?... Cant he be more truthful to his 'Wife'. .. Instead of worrying about His circumstances bout his wife matter... Can ignore his Adopted sister or something? ?.. Adding her into the story seems Lame and she doesn't really have worth in the story so far.. .. And I just realize that MC frequently asking soooo many questions to System... He still can't believe figure out himself dispute his 'Maturity '? He's still a Naive and Braindead For me despite those 'adventures' whatsoever. I'm quite 3njoy this for Soo long but the repeating scenario where mc always attract troubles... And him being overconfident and thinks that he has an upper hand in a fight but later realizing that the enemy has a hidden trump cards is irritating... There's no end for this scenario and I'm sure this will be not the last.. Meh.... Lame NGL..
