Beta Zander Perez - Reviews

i just cant get past the bad grammer, words missing in sentences it completely takes you out of your immersion and you have to reread to know what the author wanted to say. Please get a editor to fix stuff like this

The plot and such is interesting, the mc has a system that expands his power, he can choose people to become the first cultivators and all in all, the system is there to change the whole world to a higher plane.(Examples: Low-grade martial world - > Mid-grade martial world)But, it's not interesting for me just because of one petty reason.The mc is a douchebag, he has three maids taking care of him and the youngest one is about 11 years old.But he scolds her like no tomorrow. Idk why!? She is just a young child! Why do you treat other children with care and your youngest maid gets scolded!?SHE IS 11 years old! And so innocent, I cant take that the mc isn't nice to her.Although I read to ch 24, I dont know if there is a reason why the mc treats his youngest maid so harsh, I dont care anymore, I drop it.(At first it's a little overboard teasing but it gets to scolding later/bullying)Saying 'shut up and behave' to a child.. Tsk tsk, it's your maid no less.

The way the author forces in flash back in basically every chapter is seriously annoying. It just breaks the flow of the whole story and makes it all seem awkward just to dump in info, and sometimes the info is useless. I rather you make a few chapters at the start to do the info dumping, and provide the background of the world than forcing bits and peices of it everywhere. In general, the plot is progressing slowly, with some bs here and there but its ok if you want to pass time

Great book, great plot, had a great time reading it.Added it to my read list will be waiting for future updates. Hope to see chapter 3 soon.

"Is that so?"

'Deceiver, Pathfinder, and Elemental Affinity' she thought without hesitation.

He had been using this special advantage to survive so far; watching tutorials about surviving in the wild, since he appeared in the middle of a forest in Italy; he had built a hut in the forest and was fishing and collecting fruits for nearly an year while he studied Latin everyday.

hearing the Boy, Lucas eyes light up for a moment, before it's dimmed again.

"I am not."

Exp: 0/1000

''Okay.'' He replied to another guard happily. He also wanted to see his father.

"We're here to rescue you! Let's get everyone out of this camp!"