BENEATH THE UNDERWORLD - Reviews

This a very good story and please update to keep us interested.  Once again I love this story

The author is stretching the sub-plotline too much. It takes 10 chapters just for one fight and the end of that fight was just disappointing. It's been 100 chapters and MC is still baby! And not to mention till now 90% of the story is about how humans send army and MC annihilate them with his cheats they again send bigger army MC again annihilate them with his cheats but his sister get injured so the author spends another 50 chapters where MC goes on a journey to find some type of flower for his sister.The story is very very slow, fill with pointless sub-plot

Not the most detailed or dramatic story most would expect. But pretty good for casual read, i think i enjoyed this one the most out of this batch

i really hope that you guys enjoy my story! if you have any tips please let me know! i'm always open to tips and tricks on how to write something.and i just wanna say that if you've read it, thank you so much! and please leave a review and some power stones so even more people can enjoy it!

Listen I like this type of novel and all, but even the characters' first blueprint was the same... it's just another copy of a popular web novel. listen if you're an author it shouldn't be too hard to just take ideas from the book, but just don't copy it.

The story is good.  Hope the best  for the novel..  Author san...  Cayok2...  Gambatee...  Love to read  more.????????????????

Hey guys as you can see this is pretty much unlike the other books and has a different tone and different style to it. Now you may or may not like it but I would say give it a try

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" I can't wait to go down on you. I'm gonna have you gasping for air "

My vision darkens, the weight come back twice as dense than before, some of my bones break, I don't remember which, but the blinding pain is too real.

As he neared the end of the alley, the sun's brightness intensified. If one were to stare with the naked eye, they would become blind in a matter of seconds. As such, Michael shut his eyes tight and rammed past the edge of the alley. In the blink of an eye, a large clattering sound could be heard down the street.

War, it was all that mattered now.. it was what needed to be done to fix what was started between the worlds itself. If one could change the fabric of history, then one timeline could be saved to prepare for a new one with a better future. Others however, war is the beginning of stopping the final assault of enemies.. if one succeeds? They are powerful beyond any might! Aiming to become the top race to saving a new world from being destroyed and saving the other from chaos.