Beneath The Fallen Sky - Reviews

There should be a #Harlem and #incest. I guess some people will like it, but I feel there is so much pointless pornographic chapters. Understand the author is growing. However in some ways the earlier chapters were better craftedI honestly enjoy the story concept and character building. But I got to say there is a lot of POV problems, not sure if it’s meant to be a technic but, the switching of a female character between him and her is confusing. Then there are these sentences structure and strange word choice. At times I felt like I was reading a raw google translation. For me It has started to drag. I also wonder if the author will be able to remember all these character and build them. The author keeps creating what appears to be important character but stops using them, or appears sporadically. ufffcI still enjoy the story and will support but... I have less expectations now.

A funny story with an interesting premise! I like how the author develops the "System of Adding Points

60 chapters in and I notice the difference in quality right away.  I absolutely loved Warlock of the Magus World...my sincere hope is that this novel gets picked up because the story is absorbing and the horror elements really do make you look forward to the next chapter.

I find it interesting that the guy wasn't the usual oddball. he was reasonable and wasn't one to just act out. The story is really interesting starting in a new world. I like it!

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hello everyone! ?read this first. ?it's just a little warning and notes you need to take before you read: ?1. my grammar is not the best. you may even find it a frustrate read so you must hold your breath first before making a fuss ?2. this is the first book i've ever wrote so you may find many plot holes. but you can say so, so that i can do better next time ?3. the mc may appear stupid. he is talentless, not a genius. he is unlucky. even if he works hard, he just can't become stronger. and it all affected his behaviour so much ?4. the author needs help! your correction is a good thing. don't worry i will use your corrections well to improve. ?5. uhmmm.... and yeah! thanks for bothering yourselves reading this ?

Six chapters in and can’t wait to see how the story develops. I’m excited to continue readying!

While he was going the officer andrew said to himself, "they both should have made a great pair, the loss is a great setback in his career"

"Ang laki mo na, naniniwala ka pa sa multo." Natatawa si Amber sa kanya.

Agility (AGI): 8

Her eyes follow my pointing finger. "That's true. Wow. You have an eye for detail," she says, straightening out the spot. "I'll fix it."