Beneath The Crimson Gaze - Reviews

very disappointed, shadow slave has an amazing start and the main character we are introduced to is a cunning, smart person that doesn't even hestitate to poisen seemingly "innocent" people for his safety, paired with good side characters and an interesting world it would seem like it's going to be great, right?wrong. Everything you've just read gets thrown away and wasted, the main character isn't cunning (you can be cunning without lying), smart or anything anymore. Character development is random and when it's announced to happen ("beach" episode) doesn't happen and overall Sunny disappoints in every aspect.you would think that he fights against the spell and avoid being a slave? nope, he becomes the slave of someone and that's it.. he's a slave, the novel lost its uniqueness at that point and I dropped it after trying to read further, spoiler; it doesn't get better.

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Alright, so first is writing quality. The writing quality here is just amazing, hundreds of times better than most authors on the site. Just truly commendable.Second is stability of updates. I'm forced to give this a 4 because it is still too early to tell if the author will be updating on a regular schedule or not.Next is story development, which is just a bit too slow for me. I don't really know why, it's just slow in the beginning, but I promise it picks up more, so don't think it's that much of a bad thing.Next is story development, which seems really cliche right now. There isn't anything unique yet, so another 4.Finally, world background. Although the world background is really unique on the platform, I think it still needs to be more unique than some mainstream novels, because it seems like you're just replacing one ring with many rings. I'll be waiting for something unique to happen.Overall, a really good novel, would definitely recommend it casually.

Hi, everyone...I just wanted to share what's in my mind and just so you know the cover that I used for both my stories wasn't mine...all the credits goes to the owner of the pics and I did 'borrowing' it just to compliment with the titles. Thanks and sorry.?? Posting my own review ??

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Thinking back to past endeavours can sometimes stir up old thoughts and feelings. It's a common phrase that unfinished business will always come back and bite you, but people disregard this statement until it's standing at their doorstep. Kira Haruki…If only that name meant something to her. Was he an old classmate…maybe she attended university with him? Still, if he was so worried, she still held a grudge against him then shouldn't Mia be too? As she leaned back in the leather seat watching the same trees pass by, she tried her best to remember but to no avail. This was something important Mia could feel it in her gut. Was she rude for forgetting or maybe he was blowing the whole situation out of proportion?

Projections suddenly appeared on the shutters. It showed images of a thick grey mist.

I had no idea, everything seemed fuzzy and slow around me, I tried to focus on the ceiling but it remained as blurry and hazy as before. I heard a deep melodious voice speak somewhere to my right, and a strange sound that sounded like the rush of wind, of something disappearing. I blinked slowly, but when I did so my lids seemed like lead, never wanting to open again.

After that, we sat quietly for a while. While you couldn't call it a comfortable silence by any means, given that this was Minerva I was with, it was still fine. And so just as we were eating at our leisure, we'd eventually find different subjects to talk about at our leisure as well. Of course we were careful to converse in low voices so that we wouldn't get caught.

"Just hold on a little longer... Okay Monica?" Camo said, a tear falling from her eye. "I need my sister. I need you. Wh-who else can I gossip with in the morning...?" Camo asked.