Beneath Possession - Reviews

This review is at chapter 80:So my gripes are similar to the others you see in the reciews, but I have a slightly different take. At chapter 25 or 26 the MCs intelligence for some reason takes a steep decline out of literally nowhere. From a veteran gamer who hoards loot just incase he can sell it, to an idiot who questions why his companion brings him an item he can sell, whilst he carries around a pack full of starter grade junk for that exact purpose. My issue isn't the stupidity, as I like character development, it's the reasoning. The author obviously knows the MC is acting stupid, as he had his companion call him out directly for it by having her tell him to pay attention when he is told something and to think for himself. I simply find myself questioning, who is the author trying to develop/write for in this situation? It makes the MC seem mentally disabled, makes the companion seem like she nonstop complains, annoys the reader, and makes the author look like they can't write a decent character. I've found myself letting it audible sighs while reading.All this being said, it's not enough to ruin the story for me, but I know it can for some which is why I explained so much. I see the potential and have heard it gets better soon, so I'll keep reading as most of the other stuff in the novel is quite good and leaves me wanting to see more.

Yanderes are the best.......................................................................................................................

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please come back soon author ???????????

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I think your writing is pretty good, just a couple of complaints and that is in the translation, confusing genders.  I may suggest that you get an editor to assist you. I am at chapter 12 and the story line is very good. I sincerely hope you do not decide to drop the story.

I enjoyed the first 60 chapters, but the author really dropped the ball afterwards.I’ve been reading the MTL (at around c.250) and its literally the same plot over and over.The MC sends out people to do some task and right before they can complete it they are overwhelmed by the enemy and the MC has to expand the territory to save them with his avatar.Rinse repeat. Nothing is ever accomplished by his subordinates without help from the MC who saves them every time. It’s literally all the plot ever is.MC is about to have enough experience to upgrade his territory? You know there will be some fight that happens right as he upgrades which coincidentally includes everyone within his territory so that he can save them.Also, the upgrading has essentially no effect on the novel other than adding another wall that isnt even used. No additional systems, no changes to the story.Utter disappointment of a novel.

There were none to be spared for him now though. While Garren merely wanted Leo to stay out of an infantile need, nearly pleading with him as he clasped his hands together, Dane was far colder. As he always did when he was annoyed, Dane folded his arms and grimaced in a way as if he smelled rotten fish.

Bai Heng poured his energy inside the sword and immediately a massive amount of information poured inside his mind. Bai Heng absorbed the data and started examining it.

"Hachilah"

There is a reason why it was unbeatable, and that is because its power is so god like that even a Cash Player cannot survive one hit from it.

Jennie : So Lisa . Let's have a lunch together after practicing the dance .