Bello Jake - Reviews

Bello Jake
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Very slow to start but be patient, the best by the author. Each crisis builds into the next but isn’t obvious at first. There are translation errors in tense and phrasing, but can be over looked. Having Read the Raw version a few other comments the ending of the main storyline was abrupt and the final two sections weren’t needed. I would have preferred the last section to have been more fleshed out into its own story as the characters seemed an after thought and the plot was not explored to its fullest
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Is that so, Ive comment a month ago I think and someone replied he just went on hiatus
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How often are the updates? I’m a lil gunshy to start another unfinished book as several have been abandoned or just take soooo long btwn updates that they no longer hold interest or just become confusing
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great story. I am already connecting. nice one author. ...

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