There's a scene in this chapter that I keep coming back to, and I think it's one of the most powerfully written moments in the entire book. It's the winter of 1956, and the author paints this picture so vividly that I could feel the cold just reading it.
"The winter of 1956 was exceptionally cold. Adults responded to the call for intensified labor, digging ditches and repairing irrigation canals."
I love how the author uses the setting to mirror what's happening emotionally. The cold isn't just weather - it's the emotional temperature of this family. Everyone is frozen, hardened, unable to feel warmth or compassion. Old Madam Lu is described as lazy, spending her days visiting neighbors while her children take care of themselves. The adults are out digging ditches for the state, and the kids are left to survive on their own.
Then there's the scene where the two younger kids fall off the embankment. Lu Zhengqi insisted on making his one-year-old sister jump over ice puddles "just like him." They ended up on the ground below, Zhengqi with a broken arm and Xinlian with a gash on her forehead from a rock. The image of these small children playing in the snow, the ice puddles glistening, the embankment they fell from - it's so visual, so cinematic. I could see it like a movie.
And then the aftermath. Lu Zhengting cooking and doing homework while his brother steals their sister away to play. The discovery that they're missing. The frantic search through the snow. "If he hadn't known Lu Zhengqi so well and found them quickly, they might have frozen to death in the snowdrift."
The author doesn't spell out how cold it was - they just show us the snowdrifts, the ice puddles, the fact that these kids could have frozen. And then Old Madam Lu makes Zhengting KNEEL on the ground. In the cold. While she beats him.
The imagery throughout this chapter is relentless. The broken firewood sticks. The shattered broom. The iron shovel. Blood from his ears and nose. Lying unconscious and unattended. These are not gentle images. The author is building a world where violence is normal, where children are expected to care for each other while adults are absent, where the environment itself is harsh and unforgiving.
But there's also beauty in it. The moment when Instructor Zheng comes to the village - that's a shift in the atmosphere. A crack of light. Zhengting agrees to leave without hesitation. He has to escape this place. The village, the house, the cold winter - it all becomes a prison he's desperate to leave.
The author's use of setting to reflect emotional states is masterful. Every scene feels alive, every environment tells a story. I felt like I was there in that cold winter, standing in the snow, watching this boy fight for his life.