becoming the biggest tycoon - Reviews

Hello this is for the author, I havent read the book yet though i plan too once the book hits 500 ch but i would recommend you read the other books in this genre to better understand what the pitfalls of the genre are and how to avoid them, in particular I recommend reading tyranny of steel, 1453: revival of byzantium and low dimensional game along with chrysalis (chrysalis dosent have much to do with the genre but the excerpts he writes make the world building a first class example on how to properly world build). One more thing, if you want to find good videos on how to improve your writing and world building watch a youtuber called “hello future me” he breaks all of it down very neatly and makes the topics very interesting as well. Thanks alot and have a great day

It's a pretty good novel. even though it's start to get boring in later 200 chapter but it's a good novel to kill time , btw if mc doesn't have sister it's might be even better.

Pathetic MC. At about 50 chapters the MC decides to give all the gold he still haves to a random beggar on the street insted of actually doing something useful with the money. Always trying to help and stuff its honestly just too much for me can't continue reading the book it sucks because it has an interesting plot. Read at your own risk if you enjoy the basic hero trying to help every body MC well this is a good read. Please note that i am at chapter 50 so it might change in the future idk.

Não gostei da história, principalmente do protagonista. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

This is way better than I expected. The way the story flows is really nice and how the characters interact and develop their relationship is pretty good, though the romance can feel fast, just remember that he is part demon so it will make sense how the relationships develop. My one issue with this is that it's kinda hard to gauge just how advanced the world is from a technological standpoint, like at one point there was the internet(mass information sharing spell) and laptops that are magical in nature, yet the way that they travel is still with Carriages and Horses (or occasionally dragon carriages). Other than the background being iffy at best, it's a very solid read.

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Story has a lot of potential and as a fan I will urge you to update frequently. I really want to know what he’ll do with the Ultimate military system.

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