If you're into dual cultivation su yang novel,you would definitely love this as this novel ngl is alot more better as the story pacing + development have been really well done plus all the girls that was introduced into the harem have well written character setting + background story. 10/10 story that you won't regret reading!
Love the story, in general, the planning out of the world and the intricate design and character development is amazing. The protagonist has actual useful people who help him rather than needing to save them all the time, unlike other CN Protagonists. The best part is that Wang Wei doesn't think with his bottom half. So thank you for bringing this amazing novel and cant wait to see more
As in my previous comment I emphasize that it is rushing the story and not doing real world building, I will add that there is a huge problem with the interaction of the characters and the plot in general, where did they meet? When? How did they meet? How was the process of finding a publisher? When did the MC start acting classes? How did he meet his teacher, being that he's a renowned former actor? How was the audition for the role in the theater play and when did it happen?Honestly, I don't want to sound condescending but it is necessary that you as an author acquire the mentality of asking questions in order to be able to flesh out the plot, because in the current picture it seems that the character just gets the things he wants without any difficulty, besides, it sucks that you put things in that should be implied, such as the character's lack of general inexperience in what is due to things like business, among other things. It takes time to improve, take your time and start acquiring a more inquisitive mindset and this will greatly improve your writing.
"Max, Shadow wait in the wall will you. Me and Ash need to have a chat." Alex shot back at his question; what the hecks is he doing here. She thought has she grab the pencil from Ash.
