Becoming Immortal - Reviews

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A hypothetical novel where even the author doesn't know what he writes after writing a chapter. Totally a waste of time.I mean MC extracted all the toxins in his body with the system and a few chapters later he got a pill which extracted his toxins.what is the use of System if it cannot do anything??

I was reading this and I liked it but when it comes to shitty systems it me it's just another power fantasy system trash novelIf it was that everyone has their own "status"  in the world and can see them as if it was "world laws" it would have been much better although I would like it more if that was not the case it would just turn it into isekai RPGAnd also killing things for experience is just another trash plotAnyways This is just my personal opinionI have a great dislike towards the system novelsBy the way I appreciate author's efforts to write a novel

You have to pay to see all the chapters that’s just the worst and It is a really good story so far sad I’m going to have to drop it from the 41 chapters onwards you have to gift something if you want to see the full chapter.That just sucks that’s why it’s such a low rating for me if you have the money would recommend but as a brook dude I can’t buy it.

"What did you do?"

"I want to dance."

-Bandido: "Rays! It's a letter from Sabo "

E: hindi pala? Anong iniiyak-iyak mo?

" now that's my girl, I promise you'll have fun

The first thing he saw ,was Sudo and five Primex soldiers.

Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running

Haha Zhou Lei better be careful of his new thug/teacher.