Becoming a Powerful God Starting from Daily Intelligence - Reviews

Hi author here, this is my entry to the writing prompt for the school life theme.Once again hoping for support and for those who are reading Overwhelming Path don't worry not dropping that.

For an SAO parody...This isn't bad. The Kirito here seems better if you ask me. The VR logic is somehow vague for me at first but then I understood it after reading a bit far off onto chapter 20.But overall, This puts a smile on my face ;)

overall a great story however the quality of the translation is what is really holding it back, I would recommend this story getting an editor or something because it can get pretty hard to read at times

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"I need the shadow emissary. Alive. We need to have a good conversation." Naga said and smiled.

He began to swing his lance from left to right, and continued to shoot him without any hesitation.

"Shit. It's calling for reinforcements. If I remain here any longer, I'll just be ranked from all sides. I need to get out now."

Level 1-5 = First Year Signal

"Too many reasons. At first a guild needs a lot of people, and I don't want to work with people I don't really know. You and I are enough, we don't need outsiders. Moreover a guild also means a lot of management, I don't have time for that."

Parch's pupils widened when she heard that cold name.

AN: Lembar stat di bawah ini.Saya bertujuan untuk fokus pada dinamika ini tanpa urutan tertentu.Tamamo - Fraksi Yokai - Doomwing.Cu Lancer + Group - Fraksi Celtic.Sabre / EMIYA.Shirou / Caren / Harem + Tuka - keluarga + semua orang.Irina + Xenovir sisanya dari grup.Sasaki v Musashi.(Ya itu disengaja), Mittlet + Asia + Tuka - Kokabiel, Rias + Ravel - semua orang, EMIYA - semua orang, Okita - semua orang.Ini akan lambat karena kehidupan nyata, dan saya berencana untuk mengambil waktu saya.Ini akan menjadi lima hari yang panjang dalam waktu ayat DXD, seperti halnya HGW.Tapi aku benar-benar ingin memperlambat cerita untuk waktu yang lama, dan ini adalah kesempatan bagus untuk melakukannya sambil membiarkan Issei berurusan dengan hal-hal crossover gila.Setelah waktu yang lama ini berakhir, saya berencana untuk pergi untuk reinkarnasi 'menyenangkan' atau yang telah saya rencanakan untuk sementara waktu tetapi anime hanya mendorong saya untuk mendapatkannya.

"Paanong hindi lalapitan? Mayayaman kasi. Tingin ko talaga single 'yang si Sir. Zedrick. Maraming na-link na magagandang babae pero wala pa akong narinig na proposal or engagement," Paula dropped her opinion.