The narrative has been rather formulaic and predictable thus far. The protagonist exhibits near-omnipotence, despite some minor drawbacks post-transmigration, such as inheriting the vocal cords issue of the possessed individual. This limits character development and growth. Interactions between characters adhere to stereotypes, while antagonists remain one-dimensional. The possessed person's backstory feels underdeveloped, almost like a placeholder for convenient plot revelations later on.
There's a sense of inevitability in the protagonist's success, as she never truly faces defeat within any given arc. Although there are occasional intriguing moments, they are often resolved too quickly, lacking depth. Some plot points feel forced rather than organically advancing the story.
Additionally, at chapter 70, the formation of the girl group has yet to occur, indicating that the main storyline has not truly begun. As a result, the pacing and storytelling progression are sluggish. Lastly, the translation of "Fenrir" suffers from editing inconsistencies, with frequent errors within paragraphs and typical machine translation issues with character names, making it challenging to follow at times.
