Became a Traitor in an Academy - Reviews

I like the buildup of your story. Massive!!

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You have a good idea. I feel like I am not in the story. I am suggesting that you try to show instead of telling what characters are doing. here is websitehttp://***.wright.edu/~david.wilson/eng3830/creativewriting101.pdf

This is easily one of my top 3 novels i've read on this site, nothing much to say besides its amazing in every way shape and form. Good stuff author!

I swear to goddess of explosion, Megumin - sama that I had read this before but as webtoon...I forgot the title but the mc also stuck inside tutorial place for a long time until he can't even uplvl in next world because his lvl is low but exp and stat is flying off the roof...But this is bad. I remember that the webtoon is quite interesting but this one is.. Hurm...

A very fun and interesting take on the usual "Lord Game" format that many chinese webnovels use, for once the MC is not rash, racist or stupidly overpowered and not everything goes according to plan, forcing the MC to adapt and overcome the obstacles with creative solutions rather than just luckily finnding a skill or item that would just perfectly solve his problems. My only complaint would be the intelligence level of all the young masters in this novel so far, it makes me doubt they are capable of tying shoelaces without help.

What happened to your chapters?! I was going to read them, but then I found 15+ chapters gone!

Just read the first page and I was forced to give a review the story line is so cleanly writing that you would not notice it an orginal novel, the flow of the story keeps you tuned in. worth reading, really goodkeep up the good work want to see your world come to life in the minds of more readers

everything was good. the character describing and world background was great. but for starting it was really full of sadness. it really impressed me that iremembered my bad memories. hope your novel get better ranking.

One more review closer to extra chaps :). Anyways check out the review by Bird of Paradise which basically drew me into this novel. From the first chapter it hooks you in, and the further you read, the more the novel coils it’s slippery grasp around you. I’ll definitely be following this novel closely. Goo job author!

This is a great novel that shows a lot of promise. Hopefully the authors don’t screw it up later on. Hopefully this one doesn’t get dropped and I’m actually looking forward to where this I heading.

Pretty good read! It's very dark and tragic, but seems like it'll get better over the course of the story. The main character has a lot of room for growth in both power and character!