Beastbourne - Reviews

So having read past chapter 80 I feel fully confident in giving my review.  This book is not enjoyable to read, and the reason why is somewhat hard to spot.  The biggest flaw is that I, as a reader, actively want Kael to die.  He is a whiny, crybaby who got what he deserved.  He says that he suddenly has trust for women again after his mom had stepped out on his dad...but why?  He trusts two women, one of whom had a child with another man.  None of the reasoning seems to hold together very well.  The dark elements are done really well, but they don't seem to ever be in the forefront.The universe itself is fairly decent, a good story could definitely grow from these basic story roots, but it never does.  While it is possible that Kael eventual grows a set of testicles, I find that very unlikely.  Even if he does, these 80 chapters are not salvageable.

I don't Evan know what to say becaus I have never done a review before nor have I Even read these book I am literally only doing this for exp but unlike those over exp wana be's  I am a true elder of the exp sect for when I go for exp through typing comments or reviews atleast I make it intresting instead of just typing exp and if you are still reading this than I would like to thank you for your time and remember these wise words. there is allways time to read, just do it before you go to sleep

amazing one, light enough to be funny and deep enough to immerse.

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Volume 1 Review!It tails the story of Elias Gobarau when he was transported to another world that was filled with Fog and his mode of transportation was driving islands.There are 5 arcs in this volume.First Trial ArcSecond Trial ArcThird Trial ArcFourth Trial Arc Lolwah Arc andDark TrialThis was the trial Elias had undergone except Lolwah Arc. Each trial was unique with missions and hardship. He also obtains a reward that will help him adjust to the Mysterious World.In the next Volume, Elias has finished his trial and reaches the first human community!

Seriously, I'm not the fan of science -fiction so my review won't be helpful. Anyway, Good luck with your story. Hope you enjoy writing it.All the Best.

"Iron bars? Pfft, I can easily get through."

              so he lower his guard around her , as they were taking he was getting pale , Xiao Mei get worried and easily agree .

"Lo cewek paling aneh yang pernah gue temui, anehnya gue bisa betah temanan ama lo," Mavis menggelengkan kepalanya seolah aku beban berat bagi hidupnya.

(Kanina pa kasi panay 3points ni xenon at kung minsan kapag na sa kanya ang bola ay hindi naagaw ng mga kalaban sa kanya,sa bawat galaw ni xenon ay manghang mangha sa kanya ang mga team mates nito,sa bawat shot ni xenon ay nag hihiyawan ang mga babae at binabae)

"A-ah tidak papa, biasalah, tangan Ibu terbentur meja, jadi begini deh." Rina hanya ber oh ria lalu melanjutkan makannya.