Be With You - Ntr - Reviews

So far this novel has a great story, the MC mainly is very well balanced, intelligent and slightly cold, but not an emotionless cunning bastard, the secondary characters have reasons to act as they do and not only because they are good or bad, many clichés  they are avoided, especially the irritants and the gifts are well placed in the context and so they are not irritating, if I were to add something it would be the MC to have the perfect muscle just to disappear with the fragile appearance, and a different type of weapon  for him to specialize, like a war hammer or halberd that match his rough style (which he also calls for muscle)

It feels like another novel that was dropped or they just stopped the Translation and marked it as Completed. Hard to tell without the Raw            

I have a soft spot for comedic novels, hell my favorite novels come from the author You Qian who is a comedic mastermind to me at least. This novel rivals them in my heart, Heck I laughed harder than I did reading the greatest secret agent of all time. If this was in the previous batch I wouldn’t have wasted all my coins on other stories but now all I have is a measly 29 to give. It’s grand, it’s amazing and it’s short at least according to Winters_Rain and so we won’t have to deal with the author dropping it. All I see here are good points and I think anyone with a good sense of humor would love reading this! I love it and I hope some of you rich people with coins could help vote for this one because I think it deserves it, I really do. The story is also kinda slice of life and it’s well done I think. It sets up a lot of jokes and I think it’s somehow... relatable? I don’t have siblings so I don’t know but I feel like it’s down to earth if that makes sense. So yeah, I basically like everything here. The characters of the school (especially the teachers), The Mc’s family and every other character on the story so far. I think it’s quite the unique one and if I haven’t convinced you in anything just try it out and don’t take anything here seriously, this story is made to make you laugh and if enjoyed it then the story did it’s job. So go ahead you would at least get a couple chuckles, I give you the Cat_King promise. ^_^

Two words: THE BRICK!Five stars just for the brick.Fancy divine heavenly sword? Pwned with the BRICK!Peerless dragon tooth sabre? Pwned with the BRICK!Unholy trinity devil blood spear? Pwned with the BRICK!Too manly for proper weapons.Just hit with the brick. ^^

Action packed fights, intense training scenes, and interesting cultivation methods, are all things you won't find in this story. The translation itself is a slog to read through, partially due to the overly flowery language and content of the source material.  So far 47 ch in, there has been many more pgs dedicated to poetry that doesn't translate well, or at least hasn't been, than pgs of fighting, cultivating, and learning combined.  I feel like author is trying to show off how cultured he is.  The fights are very bland as far as I can interpret from the confusing translation.  Mc suddenly get good at techniques without any on screen training or exploration of the technique itself.  This does have some potential, Mc is interestingat least, but potential was squandered by poor translating and writing.

Okay, this is one of the first novel after not using WN for 3 and a half month(s)First of all, its a xianxia/video games type of novel where you can somehow brought your combat technique(s) in real life in to the game (just like RoTSSG)MC is abandon(ed ?) kid that got kidnapped and was trained into a killing machine.He somehow lost his memories (presumably because of trauma or just wont acknowledge the incident)He got adopted by the captain who raided the camp where he was trained (just like many other novel that i wont mention)Have a massive talent at both Martial arts and Psychological/Mental arts (because his real parents is "coincidentally" a hero).MC is an opportunistic guy, to say the least.And the DotA references is immeasurable.The world background is impeccable, where you literally got confused because you have to keep remembering that this was a video games novel but still have like 30-40% real world exploration unlike RotSSG where they only explore the video game world.Rate : 4/4/4/4/5

like the story but way to hard to read it poorly translated

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I am rating this highly because i see a lot of potential if writing and world background expands. Granted we are still in the beginning so there is plenty of room for development so i am anxious to see where this piece of work goes.

Orochimaru was amazed and more excited by the discovery but still tortured the child for three days with the help of clones and decided not to use any jutsu in front of the child easily, so he always activated the jutsus somewhere he did not see it.

"I would NEVER boss Chris around! Besides, although I would really love to eat whatever he makes, I can't come back for at least another week. Mom wants to visit my Grandparents and I have to go with but as soon as I can, I'll come back."