Barrier System: The Ascension of the 101st Champion - Reviews

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God if reincarnation is real make me reincarnate with this kind of system because The Amount of Potinal I see is off the roof however the Mc is so dumb that I got to a point where I had to ask myself what the author was thinking while writingAnyway, you probably improved A lot from the start but I believe there is no point in continuing.

The story is ok. But there are .ny mistakes in the translations. Very obvious mistakes. Many typos and wrong words. I don't know what the editor is doing. Is he just reading the chapters for leisure and not doing his work?

This MC is just sad.He gets betrayed by his girlfriend who he wished to marry. His father was brutally killed by scum of society. He gets scammed by capitalist bussiness owners on frequent basis. When he pleads innocent to bystanders and police they never believe him. And his family survives on scraps. Yet this MC still preaches about the goodness of humanity.What's with this faulty characterisation? A person who went through so much in life can't possibly be a virtuous, upright, person. Did I mention this MC dies in a game which somehow mysteriously transmigrates his soul back in time? Implying that being killed in a game, killed him in real life too. What is this? SAO?This story has more plot holes than swiss cheese.

Hi if anyone knows the raw name for this novel and the website its on could someone please tell me i would really appreciate it i looked everywhere the shapeshift part keeps translating to deform or transform.

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I feel that this book is overlooked, it's really quite good. Sure there are some things that could be better. Such as the pacing being a little to fast, the spontaneous situation changes and what not. Considering not just everyone can write a good book, I think it's fair to say that this is better then a good bit.

I've never been impressed until I read this author's excellent plot on top. I was hooked the minute I started perusing the lines of the story. Guys, it's a great read to entertain your eyes, Worth reading!

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"Agni, straighten your back more. Open your foot wider and lower your hips then concentrate your punches at the front."

Alexandria remembered one of her most recent friend's face and the kindness this person show to her. But then she questions why is she having this conflicted feeling, something unfit for the facts she have seen in the banquet.

As long as you work on the grammar for this itd be an pretty interesting book