Reading this story, it's obvious that the only thing the author had in mind when writing it was gore. No substance, only violence. Lacks any real creative writing, and the target audience for this would be edgy 13 year olds. The story is boring and messy, and the grammar is decent. Background had potential but screwed up by funky writing. Characters all suck, and MC is basically a serial killers wet dream and has no real value/ characterization besides being an edgy person who likes to do messed up stuff. The writing of morals in general in this story is so incredibly inconsistent and overall this just sucks. If you want a story with substance, dont bother with this.