B-ronken-R-ing 159... - Reviews

is there going to be a story on Matteo? you really write very well i would love to read more of mattteo

Read this story on wattpad and I liked it. Although it had a different title there, still a good story. A slow but interesting start and could build to something great.

So the world is heading for an apocalypse in 3 yrs and everyone on earth has the option to enter another world and get stronger.  It's not a new concept, but that doesn't really matter.  The story itself is alright, if you are into gamer stories with lots of screens and numbers,  Good writing quality and update schedule too.  The main problems of this story is the way it is currently structured.  There isn't really an engaging plot.  Like the main goal is just to get stronger, and going into different dungeons or opportunities to get stronger.  That's it.  There's no overarching plot in the Otherworld.  It's just to kill monsters, earn money and level up, and repeat.  He isn't solving problems that help people of the other world or anything.  He just appears to be amassing strength the entire time.  Also feels like the author sometimes falls into that pitfall, where the MC is the only one with good ideas and carries everyone else.  Story has a lot of potential, but the author needs to work harder to make them happen.

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The story is all over the place, sometimes he's at Asgard and the next he's fighting those aliens that invade NY with no good explanation on how he got there. I dropped it when he got all angry over Agent Coulsen's death, like he didn't know it was coming. It said in the beginning he was an avid Marvel fan.

The story was riveting except for the inconsistencies in the translation. Names were changing, different from the beginning of the story than to the last. There are also several gender errors and grammatical errors. Despite these mechanical errors, the story flowed seamlessly and the character build up was interesting. Good read but overly priced.

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"ah, ganun ho ba, sigo po tayo na." I walked towards the car.

Amari was silent as she watched the last standing jet circle back around to a loading area. Her heart was still racing from the action.

"There's not that many customers anymore,"

          A pair of deep-set eyes below was again admiring the beautiful view that was Lena.  Her nightgown, because of the night wind, was hugging her body seductively.  Her skin looked so radiantly soft under the light of the moon... She was such a beautiful sight for Patrick, he couldn't take his eyes off her.  He was sitting across Marco in the garden below. It turned out Marco is the architect he hired for his newly-acquired beach resort in the area.  The two met at some party hosted by a common friend.  Patrick is an action star, a very famous one.  And Marco is an avid fan, the very reason why he couldn't refuse when Patrick asked him to design his beach resort, even though Marco's hands were full in handling the family business.  He proudly thought it was such an honor.