I love it overall, A few word errors, grammar, etc. But english is a difficult language and it is very easy to make mistakes. I can still read the story without putting in too much effort on my part. Great character and character development, I do not see things moving too fast or too slow, which is a common problem for me when reading off of sites like this. Each chapter brings something to the party. Many writers put in filler chapters so they can keep up with the constant upkeep. On those types of novels I can skip 10 chapters and still be able to know what us going on because the character have done nothing in that time. In this novel I feel every word is there for some reason or another. Keep up the good work, hopefully you dont go premium, although I know it is necessary in many cases. Dont be blinded by greed, and most of all enjoy what you are writing. Dont turn a passion into a job, else the love will disappear. Thanks ?
