Azkaban : The funny werewolf story - Reviews

I absolutely love it. I love the way the story is setup. Have to say, I did not see all of it coming. Like the world setup and then the characters. It was really wonderful, and I love your writing techniques.

tbh it is kinda boring. maybe if you havent read many mmorpg novels you might find it good, but it is same old cliches with slight twist. all buffs turn into debuffs and all debuffs turn into buffs. poison gives health, restoration takes it. comedy is meh and it just turns into another unbalanced mmorpg protagonist with possible harem. i would rate it half a star better than average mmorpg novel on this site.

You have a very interesting way of writing and I can notice the amount of research that was put into this work. Your contrast of American and Japanese culture is executed well. You write well and I like certain vocab that you use. I am enjoying this book this far and I will read on in my spare time. Best of luck to you.

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Everything so far in the book is cool and character development holds no problems! Overall this book is one of the best and deserves its position in the ranking! The updates are also stable and you barely ever see a stop in 'em. So read this book and it's worth it.

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Looks great so far, only  chaps in and I'm already hooked! Hope there will be many more chaps to enjoy since reading is a joy of life for me!!!Good luck author and keep up the good work ;)

Honestly, the author is way too fast paced with this story, they could have started slow, progressed the character and world development and then prepared Jarvis for the fight against the demon lord or whatever. It takes just a couple of chapters for Jarvis to win the fight and it takes even less time for him to develop better technology. Also, the system, it would have been better if he got knowledge rewards instead of straight up real people, it makes the story and effort shallow and the people feel soul-less. The characters as well feel a little shallow and empty, let them develop with more screen time or whatever is the equivalent.Overall, a great story concept and execution for a first try attempt, I assume. Just slow down to story and let it breath and settle a little.

This story moves crazy slow. The lack of progress and constant POV switches to fairly unimportant characters is getting really tiring. Dialogue is also used or exposition at least half the time, and it makes everyone sound fake.Oh, and like so many of these types of stories, the MC knows literally everything for essentially no reason. This "super intelligent" MC got killed in a completely avoidable way and lucked into getting revived at the start. It's not a great character.Decently entertaining story, but not good writing.

His translator began, doing the best it could with an unfamiliar new language and mode of communication:

"Oh, that's... Uhm, unbelievable, we thought for the past years we will never have a new member. What made you decide to join our committee?" the satyr girl asked her.

When I turned to see her beautiful face was pale while using her little hands to cover her mouth