Well I finally started reading your story. I thought it was okay...??? I mean I havn't finished it yet but I know almost everything that would have happened since I already read most of it helping you write it out... Anyways I got a webnovel account since you could use the help, and because I also wanna get some more books to read.
I don't know what they meant by generic kill fest, but this one got cruel people in a cruel world. The MC will become a powerful killing machine, but it's not like killing insects every time. He's strong, but he still struggles--also not arrogant at all. This book also got comedy and romance. Not a full package, but good enough to satisfy my tastes.
its just god mode 24/7 + teenage love. I just cat read this novel. If u are 15years old or less you can try it. But for anyone 16+ it will be a terrible novel.
I have not read much yet so take this at face Value. I enjoy the few characters and their personalities that we have been introduced to so far. I also enjoy the plot, although it is not very unique i like where it is going. the only problem i have is that the writing can sound kind of weird like some things been written in present tense when it should have been written in past tense, but it does not bother me much. over all i recommend it ?
The story has a lot of potential, it is up to the author to fulfil it, but the description makes it sound epic. Will read soon. Hope it gets a lot a attention in the future.
translation is bad. I'ts possible to understand it, but its clear its machine translated and edited. I'ts one of the better machine edits though, ill give it that. The plot and story isent too bad but nothing special. Not special enough to bother reading this edited machine translation.
After reading it so far, I feel like the plot is very disjointed. The overall concept wasn’t a bad one but the execution caused it to turn out confusing and hard to read.
"Stop getting in my way, webhead!" The goblin shouted as he slammed Peter's back onto the street's blacktop surface, creating a large pothole in the middle of traffic.
