Awakened: The Beginning - Reviews

I love the way theo thinks...and yeah the character stella is so pure and care free it was obvious that he will falk in love with her ..when i read this book for second time when theo didn't have feelings for her and was sleeping with regina i was kind of hurt but u knw as the stry continued it gave +ve vibes and i was satisfied reading it

this is not a translation, this is a fanfic of the original works where the characters and setting is changed to be more in ideal of the translator.this is very unprofessional.don't call this a translation, just call this a fanfic of the original work.the ratings is not based on the original works.if you are looking for the original, just search 我能看到欲望清单.

I really had high hopes for this because Er Gen. Sadly they were misplaced.It seems that even the mighty Er Gen can't prevent himself from falling into the same old tropes, really disheartening to be honest. 10 chapters in and the MC finds his plotarmor, some qi refinement technique or some such thing.Then immediately after "finding out its name". Er Gen launches into multiple paragraphs explaining all this technical **** about this technique. The only probem is, THE MC HAS ONLY FIGURED OUT IT'S NAME, SO WHERE IS THIS FUCKING INFORMATION COMING FROM!?

What drew my attention to this novel? The Yande-*cough* definitely the System tag, always been a big system enjoyer. The story is very promising and doesn't have anything to complain about, yet. I'm gonna keep following this novel to hopefully see it prosper.

as far as stories go, this one is one of the better ones. very few typos and even fewer plotholes, it is one of those stories that you want to cuddle up under a blanket with and plough through it all in one sitting.

interesting story i will give it a try ❤️

The only problem I find annoying is the mixup of genders . MC is male but becomes she sometimes due to bad translation.otherwise I found this novel to be a good read and liked it very much .

(Riko) "Lord, this man is Jin and he is a Master level Blacksmith who owned one of the small businesses we bought."

"Thank you" he hugs me tight. But as he goes to let go I pull him in to another hug. "You okay?"

The princess and her lover confronted her father and told him that they were in love and that she was with child. To their surprise her father was happy "Haha..." the father laughed happily, "I expected something was amiss but I never thought that my daughter would fall in love with my number one general. This is a joyous occasion!"

Arturia's reaction was different. She stepped tentatively towards the massive glowing hawk, now almost six times her height, a hand reaching forward.

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