Ava's Wedding Day - Reviews

Anyone know the name of this novel in chinese or mtl(machine translated) site to read?......................................................................................................

Hmm..I like the story, but when 20 chapters are spent on 1 game and MC turns from poor and weak to rich and OP in a 20 minutes game..Then you spend 30 chapters on another game where 5 chapters are spent talking about 3 sniper shots and how the MC had a sudden personality change halfway through..There started to be some gammar mistakes happening 30+ chapters in..Now the MOST annoying thing about this book.. This is EVERYWHERE;'Amazing', 'Truly Amazing', 'Absolutely Amazing''Scary', 'Truly Scary''Cool', 'So Cool', 'Really Cool''Regret', 'Regret so Much', 'Too much Regret''Thrilling', 'Too Thrilling', 'Wonderful Thrill''Lost?', 'Lost', 'Actually Lost''Crushed', 'Truly Crushed', 'Absolutely Crushed''Quiet', 'Silent', 'Dead Silent''Stiff', 'Incredibly Stiff''Smug', 'Really Smug', 'Too Smug''Pretentious', 'Too Pretentious''Crazy', 'Too Crazy''Kill', 'Kill You', 'Gonna Kill', 'Killing', 'Say Kill, Will Kill''Too Strong', 'Too Manly', 'Too Domineering''Incredible', 'Too Incredible'And Many More.. (some paragraghs are just complete Copy&Paste)THEY ARE REPEATED EVERY CHAPTER!!

I like it, unless your looking for perfection, you’ll enjoy this story if you came here for what I think you came here for like the rest of us, so come on and just enjoy the read, I’m sure it won’t disappoint

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I hack.  One rack down.  That's a couple thousand people free.

The bus reached the bridge so this was my chance. The robber also showed the suicide vest under his jacket. This is so we would not make a move against him. I knew at this point I would die after saving these people. I sigh silently. When he looked away from our direction I charged silently. I knew how to control my footsteps to move silently and fast. It was a good technique. He turned around to check in our direction, but it was too late for him. I tackled him into the window and out of the bus. We were falling off the bridge. He let go of the button. Everything turned yellow than black.

my mom?

David looked at the child before him and said "Fine. Another reason you are here is because until we know what you are and if you're a threat to humanity, you are to remain locked up for public safety." She rolled her eyes with a sigh. Humans were all the same when it came to public safety. Such scared and a very weak species who used war as a means to show their power. Most gods and goddesses hate the fact humans had destroyed their sacred world.

Harry froze... He felt his heart freeze when the system mentioned the punishment, was there any way he could survive? Tears began to trickle down his cheek as he turned to look back at the boss, still holding her purse.

"She left me to be with you for a while."

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