At Your Command (BL) - Reviews

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Bit of a slow start so far with a lot of information that is kind of out of nowhere without context. Likely stuff that will be cleared up within the first 100 or so chapters, but honestly this is the reason I think with these new novels they should release with a minimum 100ch backlog immediately. It really hurts them in the short term, since people are impatient and want something decent and new to read right away. It also means the early reviews like mine tend to be a bit on the low side due to lack of information and depth story-wise to give it anything better. I simply can't right now, however I will obviously edit my review in later chapters if it picks up.

Y'all don't ask me any questions but just go read Chapter 163 c'mon I won't wanna waste my coin on that stuff.It seems like some sort of spirit owned our dear writer, it's crazy, if you've been following this book, you'll notice the red lights as well.I love this savage version of the author, Keep it up

Oh my God what a smut flowery sweet confession appeared here, nice trick trickery little one. Make sure more fluffyness  and sugar couting  so our days are more energized by this lovely duo.... strike,  follow  and catch em all ?????????????

SO SO GOOD!!!I cannot emphasize how fantastic this story really is, honestly. This story has practically anything I'd ever ask for: a badass protagonist who happens to be female (and does not somehow gain a selective harem even if their personality is kinda ****), great world building- although it should be noted that this story is one of my first Chinese webnovels, so perhaps it is actually not so original. I would still love it anyway!- and a good mix of cuteness! It's interesting to imagine that small 6 year old children are fighting each other with martial arts...Ling Lan is probably one of my favorite protagonists ever. She's, well, a she. But this web novel has some of my favorite genres that are often prone to having a typical Gary Stu character leading it. It's action packed and absolutely thrilling. I cannot wait when for the male lead of this story appears so that I can get a good dose of romance too! Ling Lan by herself is already great, and even without a romantic aspect this novel would be just as good. Ling Lan's personality makes me sigh with relief, because she is actually quite calculative and calm in most aspects. Of course, she is older than her peers, but that certainly doesn't lessen her. I've read some other Chinese webnovels, but I find that female protagonists seem to often be a cutout replica of each other: black-bellied, cold-hearted, kind of an ass, but sOooO sTrOng anD cOoL! *note my mild sarcasm towards the end* I do like strong leads, but sometimes I feel like the leads are somehow blessed with incredible cheat knowledge from their previous life or something. Ling Lan? She spent her previous life reading manga and whatnot! She barely has any previous knowledge, besides the fact that she is basically a grown *****. She does have Little Four, but a lot of Mary Sues seem to have insane contracted beasts that might have exceeding powers. Little Four is definitely still a cheat-like existence though.The translation quality is great, and we get pretty much 7 translations a week! I just wish I could read Chinese though because I'd probably finish it immediately~

But unexpectedly the good times didn't last, god learned about their matters, and was furious, saying immortals and the mundane didn't match, ordering Flower Immortal to return to the divine realm. That youth having lost his lover, moaned and groaned in pain all day, depressed, discarding matters of flowers, consequently the walls fell, and fences collapsed, flowers and trees withered, the land growing desolate.

"BOOOMM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

walau aku dimanja sama mama tapi mama paling tahu gimana keseharianku , watak aku, jadi dia yg lebih mengenal aku, gimana susahnya aku ?.

Heto na naman ako kinakausap ko na naman ang sarili ko. I should really visit a shrink! My gosh! Paano ako mang gagamot ng mga may sakit sa utak kung mismong sakit ko sa utak ay hindi ko magamot?

My response? I used the momentum of his rush to my advantage by grabbing his stretched arm, sweeping his leg, and throwing him over my shoulder. The guy landed upside down hurting as his neck let out a barely audible crack.

"Come on in! You're just in time for class!" I came in and sat down near the back by the window. "I'm professor Dworgyn and I'm your death professor for the semester. First, let's get you your wands!" he snapped his fin and wands appeared in our hands. "Now open your book *Magic of Death* to page 66 and pick 2 death spells, then turn to page 6 and choose one healing spells. After that you are free to go and practice anywhere you'd like. Carry on, I'm here if you have questions. Good day."

An incredibly engaging novel! The first chapter hooked me instantly, making me eager to keep reading. The dialogues are smooth and well-written, and the descriptions are solid. However, it would benefit from a bit more depth in exploring the characters' emotions and expressions.