Assassination System - Reviews

good, but need more harem
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Do you want to read a System Story with an MC that learns about the world and develops along with it?
Do you want to read an MC that grows along with the author?

Then, you came into the right place, just go read the first chapter, already!

I have had this issue in the past. It does demotivate you when people unfairly rate your work. Me. My problem is sometimes someone says something in comments. I disagree. And then one minute after they read my reply rate my story 1* due to butthurt.

At least on WN you can respond to reviews.

On WN Power Stones are what rates a novel. This is an awesome system because haters can do nothing to affect the stones you get. People who like you, give you stones. On RR you can be pulled down by haters. It cannot happen here.

So... given the fact that haters cannot pull you down. You can approach negative comments in two ways.

1) be super nice. Say they are right with everything and you will try and improve taking on board their sage advice.

OR

2) Troll the **** out of them. Seriously what can they do? not give you power stones? Guess what your fans will love it.

So Far chicken Skully has been super nice. But...I haven't run into any ****turds yet.

I like the fact that circumstances are pushing him to abandon his emotions, but it slightly irks me how powerless the MC is in all sorts of situations. He's literally being punched around by the world as of now. Please give him a nice and fluffly romance to settle down, the boy has been scarred from the betrayals~

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Very poor buildup. Rushed beyond compare and nothing is explained. A totally unreliable NEET MC dies from Weebing too hard apparently, and then becomes reliable, able to kill, smart, and good with girls after he transmigrates. He is the polar opposite of the previous body’s owner, and does multiple things totally out of character. It’s an interesting story design, but the execution is just garbage. I was hooked and spent about an hour or two reading more than I planned, but I kept cringing at the sudden unexplained changes and finally couldn’t handle any more.
Points for the story
None for the design

Gave it a 1 star rating for the sole reason that they said that One Piece would come to a end. One Piece will never end, and for spouting such blasphemy you get 1 star sir. Otherwise great novel but you really crossed the line.

I can't suggest you read this. The characters are two-dimensional, villains and the MC both. The MC is an idiot suggested to be a clever reincarnated human from Earth however. He's using an assassination system however the novel we thought we'd get, after about 25 chapters devolves into a 'RUTHLESS ASSASSIN MC' falling for a divorced woman with a daughter used as a sex slave and made powerful for no god damn reason.

Calling it an absolute trash is an insult to the word trash. If you want to know why read it and experience the pain first hand
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Yeah......
I can't. Didn't develop an interest in this.
Somethings are too outrageous for even "screw physics."
Bye bye

Apologies, I have to bullsh*t a little more for the review to be accepted.
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I think that ought to do it

At least you put more twist in the story..
later i guess after this arc..

that will be cool if there is an assassin system..
there will be other system like warrior system meaning there are other reincarnators in this world but still focus on the mc...

that will be more diffuclt i guess......
but continue the hardwork...

I tried to finish this novel, made it to chapter 270ish.  Despite the writing level being that of a drink middle school student at the start, it seemed to have an interesting enough premise, and potential.

It failed to live up to any of that.  World building was haphazard in those places it did exist.  Comparable power levels shifted to fit whatever the author needed to happen at that time.  Character personality and background morph with little regard for what's gone before. There is little to no structure, characters show up, randomly interacting with extreme familial intimacy, that have LITERALLY NEVER BEEN MENTIONED BEFORE!!
The system is hauled out doing stuff that just needs to be done, but seems to ignore its own rules most of the time.  It is also largely ignored except when the writer screws up and needs a hand wave solution.

Do not read this book, almost anything is better, and I regret the money I spent unlimited cling chapters because I gate to not finish something I started, regardless of how bad it is.  This book however has made me break that trend . I'm only 20 chapters from the end, but I just can't go on.

On top of everything else the author needs a serious proof reader as he constantly gender bends his pronouns, mixes up names of who he is referring too, contradicts what he said a paragraph before, and twists idioms to inadvertently reverse their meaning.

He also seems to have a fixation with people finding 10-12 year Olds as sexual/romantic/r*pe targets, or implying that someone had kids, at 13, after years of abuse, as if that age was "standard". (23 year old (which he considers mud 20s) with a 10 year old daughter for example).  This extends as low as it seemingly being "normal" for the 8 year old twin sister of one character, to have been trading sexual favours to folks for a living.