ASHES OF THE SUNDERED STAR - Reviews

At first, the story is admittedly a little confusing, but at the same time, it's interesting enough to make you want to understand more. Over the next chapters, everything starts getting clearer and you find out just how thought out the world-building is.The grammar and writing quality, in general, is good, I had no problem understanding anything.Looking forward to the next chapters!

Ok I reaaaaaaally wish you win that contest! I’m in love with this webnovel, The protagnist is cool amd we need that kinda mcs so thanks! Thanks for writing this masterpiece author.

Hello Author here. Gonna shamelessly give 5 for my work. Do have a try. Looking at the beginning, seems as action, a pinch of drama, with one teaspoon of maybe romance and a bowl of mysteries. With further chaps, the other genres comes into play, with some surprises. Still in the stage of development. So the chap release may take a little more time. Will work on it to improve the chaps.P.S: Comment and share your suggestion, So I can rectify some errors I might have Missed.

Best Of The BestI can't Wait every time u upload chapters I love it so badly ❤Always sharing it in FacebookThanks Author For This Work.?

I like this novel but they stopped at chapter 37 and this tells me that the novel is most likely from Faloo and i hate Faloo :)            

I love it! I think the first few chapters could still use a bit of fixing, but later into the story you can really see how much has the author improved! Let’s just hope the story will continue to be so good!

-ah, did I wake you up miss? The maid asked worriedly

"Yee enak aja kalau ngomong, nggak ah aku udah nggak demen sama cowok"

Mark :*whispers*well see about that at gym..

We planned to travel early going to Moss Deep City so at 3:00 am we already woke up and prepare our things . Joe is very excited to go home , he really talk a lot since the time he woke I can see that he is excited . Meanwhile Gregory has just prepared the breakfast and pokemon food while Hiennrich is busy packing lot of stuff . I went downstairs and go outside to fetched Charm .

"Humans act human.  Can't always be helped.  Well, tomorrow then."  Jamal walked off.  

This is the second time a review this book.What I like is that the ML is relatable and the overall action is keeping you on your toes .Great suspense !