asdasdada - Reviews

Came back here to comment about how badass the heroine Agent Nova is! I am loving how strong women are portrayed in this story, which is rare thank youu

Overall it's pretty decent, with fun and likable characters and a somewhat interesting world. Though the dialogue feels bad since they talk exposition most of the time, it is still an enjoyable read.There are a few issues with the writing, as there are sometimes missing or misplaced commas, periods, apostrophes, and etc. Along with some missing words.Though it's not a big deal as I can still understand it, it does ruin the flow and takes you out of the book.I recommend using grammarly and a bit of proofreading.

it's hard for me to read webnovels that involve the mc being a Buddhist cuz (correct me if I'm wrong) unlike other cultivation, buddhist cultivation is solely based on belief. I don't understand how MCs can level up cultivation and skills with their system that are based on belief without having any.

Author here! Another shameless review ;)Hopefully I can live up to my own set of high expectations. I would love to write more and will continue to work on this novel arduously. I also have another novel that I will be posting updates for on my Pateorn account. It is about half way done.https://***.patreon.com/kalrock

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She stopped glazing hastily at her right hand seeing that Sarang and Chinhwa had gone missing into the deep moving crowd as people passed by her like a gaping hole....

"Yoongi!"

- Te gusta el novio de la capitana - esto provocó que los ojos de la joven se abrieran como platos al tiempo que callaba  a su hermana jalándola a un espacio despejado.

The woman behind the desk frowned. "You don't seem to be taking this very seriously. Do you even want a job?"

Rank 10 apprentice (stats average 500)

In the year 5096, Lance, a 16 year old male, was excited for today was his first day in heaven's light. Heaven's light is a place where the impossible is possible. Such as with special items or equipment one could do the impossible. Well, lets get strait into the story. Lance entered into his consciousness and went into a part deep within called the spacial flash. It is called this due to the bright light flashed upon the first entrance. Lance was then startled to the verge of insanity when he discovered he was falling out of the sky.

"Impossible!" Commander Blitz staggered backwards as the boy before him seemed to appear extremely intimidating.