Ascension: Online - Reviews

Mind. Blown. Would definitely read a whole series of these.
Forthright you could obviously tell the author did his research; having to create a character with such a rollercoaster backstory gives the story a perfect first person view.

First chapter got me hooked and I if I were the person reading this review, would 100% check the book out to see why its a 5 star. [img=recommend]

Great book! The pacing is really good, and the MC here is an accurate representation of the types of relationships Cyclxne experiences in his school :DDDD

Writing Quality: Well-written and smooth to read through.
Stability of Updates: Good
Story Development: Interesting premise so far.
Character Design: Great
World background: A modern setting and a game setting, very good.

this is going to be my first review after checking out 3 chapters of the story. so far pretty good we expect the typical vr gaming background if you have read one before. i just dont like the mc character pretty coward . he got this old classmates bullies for some reason he is afraid of them and my imagine is running wild because a normal guy would only be afraid of physical bullying since base on my opinion and info i have read so far, he is someone who does not care about social life. somewhat of a recluse quiet child .If  i were the mc i should at least try to do some self defense he is 5 feet 9! if i am going to bully him as a 5 6 when i was 14 years old back then i will at least think twice regardless of his physical type. the bully trope is getting old now a days since we know that typical quiet child is not afraid to pull a trigger to kill his classmates like in america hahahah.

i want to see our 5 9 mc grow some backbone if he is being physically intimdiated because as i mention i dont see the mc getting affected by words or insult to have that kind trauma. so i say it is pretty unrealistic to me as a common citizen

so far very good introduction. i think i need to read more  chapters before updating this review but it at least got me hookup and the story is interesting.

It's a good read. the pacing was good and there weren't any glaring issues with the writing. I'm not a fan of info-dumping backstory straight at the first chapter but this story made it work. Hopefully, you'll like it as much as I have.

I'm not usually in to video game stories, but this might just change my mind! Great and world building, an interesting plot and smooth writing. I enjoyed what I've read quite a lot. Good job, author! (:

Honestly an unbelievable experience, thus far - I'm incredibly impressed with the character development and design, with the main character's backstory being very detailed. This is genuinely a masterpiece that people should consider reading, even if the fantasy genre isn't your thing.

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What a cool

I can not lie, the main protagonist is quite captivating. I love his sense of humor. For me I think it's one of his strongest attributes.
The writing quality is good and the character design is Wonderful.  I love the meaning of his name

Good Day Ladies and Gentleman, first Review so pls bear with me.

The Story so far is about a Boy who is bullied by his Schoolmates, loved by his adorable older sister (I really liked the Characterdesign) and looks for a Change of life. He goes into a Game and hopes to find what he is looking for. I don't wanna spoiler you guys so I just say there are some very funny and outstanding turns, which give hope the story.

The Writing quality is very good in my Opinion (I don't wanna use comments to "correct" the Author with my low quality 2nd language english. You can read the story without getting out of the flow.

Updates are Stable so far, 1 Chap for every day. (Much to the sorrow of the reader who wants more!)

Story development is hard to say. With 9 chapter so far you got a kinda well round development.

Character design is very good I think. So far we got some loveable persons aside from MC. And I hope that we got more of those chars. A little minus for the "God".

World background is in my Opinion a process in the first 20 chapter so I think there is something coming.

Well I hope I got someone to read this far and help you to animate you to read this story. I personally think it got some really good potential and you give it a chance. For you and the Author. Good day for you all and bye.

Pretty good I think ! ! !























































































Pretty good I think ! ! !
Pretty good I think ! ! !