Ascension of the Void, Vol.1: the forgotten one - Reviews

I really liked the first version, hence my high rating for so few chapters (4). hope this repost gets past the original(67), which is a rare achievement for reposts. good luck, author.

Personally, I think wildfires are terrible. But this is just a work of fiction so it’s fine... right?                                      

The story seems promising, I adore strong MC who can be a hero for themselves so that is a plus. However there is a few mistakes that can easily be fix through a proofread. ?

Literally why is every novel that has a female MC listed in the ROMANCE GENRE??! Is this gender racism?!（｀Δ´）！（｀Δ´）！（｀Δ´）！（｀Δ´）！（｀Δ´）！

"River!"

Although my mind was filled with such 'cowardly' thoughts, on the outside, I maintained a calm expression. The increasing feeling of panic was muted by my confusion at the strange situation I found myself in. How the hell did I end up in a forest?

The youth gulped as he focused on the screen  following which a new window opened up as it displayed several items.

"In your dreams."

The guards rested next to the tall white walls that surrounds the Palace. Upon the top of the walls some guards patrolled casually, walking past the Marble faces that lined the walls of the previous Kings and Queens, that faced out at the city beyond.

"Celine, darling thank you so much for coming. You don't understand how much this means to me." Eliana said with joy. Her cheery voice maid me wince the tiniest bit.

"wtf earthquake!?" someone from the front seat screamed

My lab was only a couple stops away and I was there in no time. And the location ended being even more perfect than I hoped.