Ascension of the Threadless - Reviews

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Main character is the epitome of reused reincarnation plot. Reveals so many of his cards early on when he has no power and no cultivation. Attracts people who want his knowledge. Probably will fight against them. Repeat.Also introduces him as some almighty expert that “accidentally died” without any explanation.... no enemy? Just oops... I tripped over a rock and died as one of the top 10 cultivators.

The story reminds me of our old MMO days ????I like the twist with the world destruction so much! Keep going please. Go go go Antares save the world!!!

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So far I'm liking the story just kind of wishing the updates were faster and the characters weren't well.... Cliche I guess because I've seen a lot of brainwashed and of slave girls getting saved though that wasn't really them being saved wasn't the problem ugh I'm a really not good at explaining sorry if you don't get it

I really liked the story, but it's impossible to read with all these grammar errors and poor editing. I feel it would be an easier fix than just having a bad story. I hope the author looks into getting either a better editor or get a programm checking the grammar

just my personal opinion but I think you should focus on the writing quality of the chapters rather than releasing so many chapters at once, ngl, the story itself is really good but instead of rushing to release chapters I think it would be better to sit down and check your writing and see how it can be improved, other than that it's a great story as a RI fanboy I love it even more

Overall, story isn't bad. Plot seems believable, but some parts are kind of rushed. Please get a good editor and fix all those grammar mistakes - don't just use google translate or thesaurus. Also, don't drag out and mansplain too much.

Very enjoyable version/remake of “The Novel’s Extra” - while it follows the same plot, I really like that the MC was changed from male to female and the “hero” now has a crush on her. Looking forward to more.

"Then let's us bear your children" Olga said shortly with a smile "After all, it would be a huge honor."

Priya made the move out of anger but now she was little frightened, and looked here and there, her eyes were searching for Hikari.

          "Don't talk about fetishes with me, I'm literally 12. To answer your question, my mom is making us go to school, and the government tells us to go. Just-just stop ruining the moment, it's supposed to be badass."