Ascension of Souls Online* - Reviews

author quite frankly if cain and kali end up against eachother in any way were going to have to throw hands and thats on god dont tempt me do you understand 1v1 rust noscopes because i will not be reading anymore i swear

Author of this novel . Unlike others I won't pretend that my work is a 5/5 , but I think the good point of this novel will be the world background as I will take multiple old myths and reincorporate them inside the game to make the story really interesting ( Like Fate for those who knows ) .The bad point of this novel is obviously the writing quality , although I'm not terrible , it's obvious that this novel is far from perfect in this category .

I like the story and for once an actual kind hearted Chinese MC However, the translation quality is terrible Please get a competent editor

This is a really great novel. I have always liked a more dark cultivation story and this novel does that really well. I like the power stages and all the technique’s involved, they are not over complicated but still feel in depth and interesting. the story has more elements than just cultivating and killing and they all work well together. Give it a fair chance and you will like it.

Oh my God what a smut flowery sweet confession appeared here, nice trick trickery little one. Make sure more fluffyness  and sugar couting  so our days are more energized by this lovely duo.... strike,  follow  and catch em all ?????????????

Maybe suggesting "half" was a bit reckless from my part. I'm sure I will regret it later. However, for now it's better to divide the profit by half than get kicked out of this area.

"Aa.. itu. Aku sedang memikirkan seperti apa pesta pernikahan kita nantinya. Waeyo? Kenapa kau menanyakan ini?" jawaban yang diluar perkiraannya.

That's because it was a way for me to express the passion I have for u..

Sebuah kekuatan yang dapat kugunakan untuk membalas semua perbuatanya itu.

"It's your own fault." Wanda accused, "No one made you do this." She said as she gestured around her.

I’ve read a lot of books on here and this one is my favorite. I really appreciate the steady releases and the thought into the story. Keep up the great work!

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.