Ascendancy of the Forsaken - Reviews

One of the worst fucking novel I have ever read, hero is like ultra super star, he will fight with everyone, let's say if his cultivation is in stage-1 he will fight with stage-10 people. One of the worst thing is no background development or no creativity in story etc etc etc

Really good novel from Mao Ni. The main characters are really likeable and the even the antagonists are likeable and understandable. However the story is a little slow paced at the start as it focuses more on world building and character development. The story becomes really amazing later on and the language used in the story is fantastic.

I really love this story, it's quiet, funny and what made me like it the most are the really cool and well-developed characters.                  

Hope everyone enjoys the book.                                                                                                               

A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US

Unironically the most realistic novel.But seriously, this is a real big brain 10000 iq move.  Teach me how to become as M A S S I V E B R A I N E D as you m8.

the MC is pretty dense and nieve, but his background and age kind of explain this. feels like a flawed person who doesn't always make the right choices, not like the author had him make dumb decisions for the plot. the story overall is pretty good and original. The pacing just seems off, I think it may be due to how much the MCs travel is detailed or details about background characters when it's not clear if they are important to the story.

Incredibly well thought out. Plot development flows beautifully. The characters do need a bit more depth. Excellent work.

"With whom?"

M's Mother died because of an illness thet wasn't Cured Bacause of Lack of money M had to work for The money for her mothers operation she had 2 Jobs after School but then one day it was a saturday she had a To go to a Performace with her older brothers Since M was talented she has a beautiful Voice along With the talent of good in dancing and playing any type of instruments But before she came To the performance her mother didn't want her to leave with an unknown reason(Because she was dieying) (sorry for the Spelling readers I'm not good at spelling only in Grammar) but M didn't do what her mother asked her Cause That Performance was going to give her the money she needed for the operation but before the perfomance Someone called her... It was Her Auntie on the phone "Mira Kailangan mo pumunta dito sa Ospital"

All that glitters is gold

Very good writing, and it’s still improving with time. Story is very enjoyable as well, with a good balance between comedy and seriousness at all time. It may not totally deserve (for now) the 5 stars I gave it, but I think it deserve more visibility and I’m sure a lot of people are going to enjoy it. (P.S: author is goated asf?)