As If Not The Main Character - Reviews

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

Hi ,

This is Shirley, I am an editor an editor of a digital writing platform- D R EA M E.
After reading your book, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected]
, then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail.

It was a great pleasure to meet your story.

Sincerely
Shirley

Grammar needs to be improved, otherwise it's a decent novel with an actual low key main character.

there have been low key mcs before but the moment someone does'nt give them "face" it's over with being low key. i hope this character stays low key even when he gets stronger.

writing quality: bad grammar but it is not unreadable.2.5 stars would mean average so I'll give you 2 stars
stability of updates: no clue only 3 chapters are out. I'll give you half stars so 3.
other things can't be judged with 3 chapters released.
Character design: I'll give you 3 stars, until now the characters are pretty generic and except for the mc no other characters were properly introduced, but as i said  i'm eager to see a low key mc.

130 chapters 9-30-23

did you quit writing?