This web novel ranks among the most disappointing reads I've encountered on this platform. Even as someone who occasionally indulges in the guilty pleasure of poorly executed wish-fulfillment novels with sign-ins and cash back systems, this particular story leaves me utterly speechless.
The incessant inclusion of mind-numbing "comments" akin to those found in Chinese novels, but in a PERMANENT live stream format, is beyond tolerable. Most functioning human beings find little enjoyment in the brain-rot induced by such dialogue, and this novel takes it a step further by subjecting readers to an unrelenting barrage of these comments, leaving no room for respite.
While I'm usually open to overlooking a single flaw in a novel, this one offers nothing redeeming or enjoyable. The plot follows a predictable cycle where the protagonist gets into trouble, feigns cuteness, and effortlessly dispatches enemies, accompanied by a chorus of repetitive and uninspiring commentary like "ohhh wow how lucky" or "her dad is trash!" or even "it's that pink kids smartwatch!".
The only potentially interesting element, the overpowered dad, remains conspicuously absent for the initial 20 chapters. Anticipation builds, but disappointingly, even after a half-year time skip, the narrative fails to deliver on this promising aspect. The protagonist embarks on another dungeon adventure, further delaying any potential revelation about the father's character.
