ARLUNA - Reviews

needs a 2nd!

Wating for  it to countinue Where are those chapters

This story deserves 5 stars.Writing is good, no bad grammars. It is neat and cool story that deserves more outreach*love* *love* *love* *love* *love* *love*

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The character design is quite bad, for example when did magikarp become a gyarados and when did he catch a litten. The story development also needs work, you need to slow down a little and show him bonding with his pokemon.

i just came here to randomly support the author?.the book is worth the read, you guys should give it a try as well. although there are some grammatical error but still ist worthy.More chapter please!

up till now is good lets wait for more updates

duike suddenly heard shang'a while he use duikeaction!

[ Host. It would be preferable to take the Blood pill now while your injuries are still fresh as they will heal a lot quicker. ]

-Where is he now mom?

Yun didn't move, even when the business time approached, and he still acted close to this suffering mother. He explained everything to the finest detail and never ran away except for occasional tea making.