Arise From The Ashes, Beyond Greatness! - Reviews

I could give a 5-star but the pacing is a bit fast. It wouldn't hurt to take time to progress the story naturally. But I get it, sometimes being a writer is dealing with excitement for the new ideas you thought of. But please, moderate it as much as you can.

A genre I wouldn't usually go for, but the plotline seems captivating enough until the point I have read! The grammar is understandable too, and keep up!

........this should be protect our patriarch..,.,.........,...................................................................................

ok can't wait for mare if you just fond this novel it is small right know but this novel has the putenshol to go far ** I want mare .        :)

The story itself is good but there's a few issues with spacing. A tad bit of story gaps but it's still understandable, not too many issues with grammar and all that jazz so we good there. Other than that it's a good story

"A friend?"

"C-captain Garet! Forgive us. I and Lie will continue our training."

Then it was my turn.

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

Love and I’m obsessed ? ? . Can’t put it down