Ariadne: Almost an Alpha | ✓ - Reviews

I've read up to chapter 600 or so and, like most of the stories here, it has potential but is wasted because everything comes too easy to the protagonist.Does he need to evolve? wild situation happens and he goes to the next level... Does he needs money? boom, a senior gives all of his money to him, or he finds part of a sect's minnning ground and has lots of spirit sones...The plot if filled with situations too convenient added to make him grow easily.

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no just the fingernail

They didn't know or understand how incredibly wrong they were, Mora thought. It was funny how he was able to even sneak in and out without anyone noticing, he wondered why?

"MAti… Mati kau. AHAHAHAHA…" Joshua mulai menebas nebas zombie seperti orang gila. Shadow sword ditanganya dengan gampang memotong tubuh zombie, seperti memotong sayuran.

I shouted, Leo then stopped walking, without turning he stood there.

     She ran toward me and pushed me to the counter,(Ummm excuse me but  not only did you push me you just pushed a girl that knows how to box, shhh... its a secret) as she grabbed the knife from the cutting board she charged right towards me and along with my boxing and my lucky reflexes I grabbed her left arm with my right and grabbed her right hand with her right where she was holding the knife and made her turn her back to me and pushed her arms up like how police would do it.  Mason grabbed her shoulders and made her sit on the chair. And yelled at her why she did it and saying that "IM NOT YOUR BOYFRIEND AND I NEVER WAS INTERESTED IN YOU YOU'RE JUST A FRIEND!!!!" she didn't apologize but she sure did use my washroom to cry in. (like for three hours).

(john):- main apni shaktiyon ka galat istmal nhi karunga or nahi kissi ko karne dunga.

"From?" Shinobu asked coolly.

Tok.. Tok.. Tok..

Seems like you dropped your novel like the others( maybe because you busy?)..??.. you clearly had a potentially good novel.. just hope you find some time later.. I will be waiting for ya..

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play