Apocalypse Shelter: Trapped in My Own Fortress (末日庇护所：被困在自己的堡垒) - Reviews

This is one of the best original novel out there. It has a good story that is engaging, the MC and the FMC's have their own personality and are fleshed out well and are not shallow, the chapter update are somewhat constant, the writing quality and grammar of this novel is one of the most better quality for those writing an original novel, the WORLD BUILDING ~ well there's only a little bit of world building since it's a slice of life story.My only complain of this novel is it's pacing, more specifically; the time progress. It is too slow, I have read up to chapter 130+ but only more than a month have passed in the story and in this time, many events had happened.But overall it is still a good novel

really bad grammar, not creative at all...why the hell is this so high rated??? I am pretty sure there should be better stuff in the top 20???

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well translation su cks it's too heavy on Chinese culture and mythology ,one way a outsiders could read this is bye shutting down his rational part of the brainit's nothing new the initial settings a 100% copy of  another older novel i think even the name of the sect is somewhat similar , as for the later part there are hundreds of novels with same setting of mc one with dao etc thou the cheat is somewhat different but core of it(lifespan ) is too present others this would still be good for Chinese readers but definitely not of international readers

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So this was definitely an interesting story which can attract those who play these types of games such as myself and I enjoy how the author was able to capture the feeling like the odd one out around many other experienced players. Sadly, while the current story is very interesting, it is riddled with grammatical errors, bland descriptions, and a severe lack of emotions. There is much, and I mean much to be desired from the novel as it has a great plot but it isn't executed very well. Taking some time to re-read your chapters and rewrite them will definitely increase the popularity of your story. Writing isn't that easy, but I know you can improve!

though the English needs work... the characters are well portrayed, you can truly feel there emotion, and the pace of the story is not fast nor slow, just right...**. overall I like the story

Five star review for best snu snu scene.

[Enemy has died]

"Yes, I heard there is a spring in Tapovan, around 15km from here," Biki said.

Lycan then said "Then completed my first task for you, if you complete it I shall make your life expectancy increase by 500 years and stop whatever soul experiment you're doing it will take your sanity away. Here is the file of task/ mission you have to complete. Don't disappoint me and finally don't challenge me. You're seal and Reward will be given after the task is complete."